Your words are drowning them (less words = more impact)
Apr 25, 2025 6:16 am
Workplace Multiplier by Tola Akinsulire
April 26, 2025
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Your words are drowning them (less words = more impact)
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We've covered saying what people need to hear and saying it in their language. Today, we tackle perhaps the most challenging building block:
Say it with as few words as possible.
The human attention span has fallen to around 8 seconds - less than a goldfish. This isn't just about presentations - it affects every workplace conversation.
Aiming to always be the one that "explain everything thoroughly" is not a compliment for all times.
Your insights might be valuable, but you're burying them under too many words. By the time you reach your point, people have already moved on mentally.
The Cost of Excess Words
Every unnecessary word:
• Dilutes your main point
• Taxes your listener's limited attention
• Signals you haven't fully clarified your thinking
When Warren Buffett writes his annual letter to shareholders (arguably some of the most important financial communication in the world), he intentionally writes at a fifth-grade reading level.
Not because his audience is unsophisticated, but because clarity trumps complexity every time.
The Brevity Blueprint
Here's how to cut to the chase without losing impact:
1. Start with your conclusion - Don't build up to your main point; lead with it
2. Follow the Rule of Three - Limit supporting points to three or fewer (notice how our communication series has three parts?)
3. Eliminate qualifier words - Words like "just," "actually," "basically," and "very" rarely add value
4. Test for understanding - And if possible after speaking, ask specific questions to confirm comprehension
Your Challenge for Today:
Take an email you need to write today and cut its length by 40% before sending. Remove any sentence that doesn't directly contribute to your main point.
The Complete Communication Formula
Over these three days, we've developed a complete formula for commanding attention in any setting:
1. Say what they need to hear (focus on their priorities)
2. Say it in their language (adapt to their professional vocabulary)
3. Say it with as few words as possible (respect their limited attention)
Master these three elements and you'll never struggle to be heard again - whether you're speaking to one person or presenting to a hundred.
Fellow Workplace Multiplier,
Keep winning at work and in life.
Tola Akinsulire
Your Strategic Workplace Mentor
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