Part II

Dec 22, 2024 10:37 pm

Daniel, 


Yesterday I told you about how I prompted AI to write a copy to sell my laptops. 


And if you remember in my email 2 days ago, I talked about how you need to be intelligent and specific with your prompts. 


Remember?


Good.


Today, I want to show you the prompt I used to get AI to write the copy, the results it gave me and then the two promotional messages I was able to weave out of the copy. 


First, here’s the prompt I fed the AI with (guess which AI I used).


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Write a creative and entertaining copy to sell Laptops using the angle of the harmattan season.


Start by giving valuable information on the dangers of dust on devices and state how to prevent those consequences.


Transition into pitching the purchase of laptops from KD Gadgets.


Make sure the headline is catchy, fun and had a jolly vibe that is consistent with the Christmas season.


And don't sound like AI please. 


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That last part was intentional.


Now, here’s the output from the AI. 


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Harmattan Haze Got Your Gadgets Wheezing? Deck the Halls (and Your Desk) with a New Laptop from KD Gadgets!


Ho ho hold up! Is that Santa's sleigh or just another dust devil swirling through the harmattan haze? We all know this time of year brings the festive cheer, but it also brings that pesky fine dust that gets everywhere. And trust me, your laptop isn't thrilled about it.


That fine, powdery dust isn't just annoying; it's a real tech villain. It can clog fans, causing overheating (which is a major performance killer), scratch screens, and even short-circuit delicate internal components. Nobody wants a laptop coughing and sputtering worse than you after a harmattan jog.


So, how do you protect your precious tech from this dusty menace? Here are a few quick tips:

  • Regular Cleaning: Grab a soft, lint-free cloth (microfiber is your best friend) and gently wipe down your laptop regularly. Compressed air can also be a lifesaver for blasting dust out of those hard-to-reach places like vents and keyboards.
  • Keep it Covered: When you're not using your laptop, keep it stored in a case or bag to protect it from dust buildup.
  • Avoid Dusty Environments: If possible, try to avoid using your laptop in excessively dusty areas. I know, easier said than done during harmattan, but even a little bit helps!


But let's be real, sometimes a good cleaning just isn't enough. Maybe your trusty laptop is showing its age, or perhaps you're just looking for a tech upgrade to kick off the new year. Well, guess what? KD Gadgets has got you covered!


This holiday season, treat yourself (or a loved one) to a brand-new laptop from KD Gadgets. We've got a wide selection of top brands and models to suit every need and budget. Whether you're a student, a creative professional, or just someone who loves to binge-watch Netflix, we have the perfect laptop for you.


And because it's the season of giving, we're offering some jolly good deals on select laptops. Think of it as a little Christmas present from us to you!


So, ditch the dust-induced tech stress and upgrade your digital life with a shiny new laptop from KD Gadgets. Visit our store at [Your Store Address] or check out our website at [Your Website Address] to browse our latest deals. Don't let the harmattan ruin your tech – let KD Gadgets deck your desk this Christmas!


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Now, let’s admit. 


That copy still reeks of AI innit? 🌚


Yes it does. 


So here’s what I did. 


I extracted some of the ideas I liked from the copy and strung them together I my words, infused a little bit of my personality and added some cultural context. 


The result?


Well, I already showed you the first copy I drafted from it yesterday. You can re-read yesterday’s email to refresh your memory. 


And Part II?


Here you go. 


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"Shake Off the Dust"


Yesterday, we established that the number one enemy of your Laptop is DUST—especially this harmattan season.


So the big question is... 


How do we deal with this enemy?


How can you protect your laptop from this dusty menace?


How can you "Shake Off The Dust?" 🌚


Here are a couple of things you can do.


  • Regular Cleaning: Use a soft, slightly damp and lint-free cloth (lint are small loose pieces of cotton that stick on the surface of a fabric) — preferable microfiber — to gently wipe your laptop regularly. 


  • Proper Storage: When you're not using your laptop, don't just leave it on the table or out in the open. Keep it in your bag instead. 


  • Avoid Dusty Environments: Sounds like common sense, although easier said than done in this current climate. 


But as much as you can, try to avoid using your laptop in dusty environments. 


Remember, dust buildup in your laptop can significantly impact your Laptop's performance negatively. 


Heck, it might be the reason your laptop is currently lagging or under performing. 


But let's be honest here. 


Shey that your old laptop never try? 🌚


You've been using it for years now, and it has been with you through thick and thin, summer and winter (harmattan in this case). 


Maybe the reason it's declining in performance is because of its age. 


Maybe it's because of the sheer amount of workload you are putting on it. 


Maybe, just maybe, you just need to upgrade to a better laptop. 


Maybe you need to experience what it feels like to use a fast, powerful and RELIABLE laptop. 


Guess what? 


It's possible. 


And with a little additional Christmas Present of N10,000 OFF every purchase this Christmas, 


You can get yourself a brand-new LAPTOP (or UK Used as the case may be) from KD Gadgets


We have a wide array of top brands and models that will suit your specific needs and budget. 


All you have to do? 


Send a DM. 🫰🏾


— KD™




P.S. The discount offer closes in 3 days. 


Kick dust while the sun shines, or how did they say it again? 😏🌚


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So there you have it. 


Now, tell me. 


What do you think of the AI prompt, the result and both promotional messages I formed from it?


Let me know by replying to this email.


I hope you learned a thing or two from this mail. 


Because that’s all I have for you today. 


Have a lovely night’s rest. 


Yours for using AI proficiently,


— KD™




























































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