I need your help!

How filthy is your mouth?

I'm working on the good scenes from my upcoming paranormal romance and I'm trying to get the perfect balance of... words. You see, my FMC loves to say the really naughty ones.

If you dare, read below and let me know what you think.

Also, here's a warning picture for anyone reading at work...



“Not fair,” Sarel whispered, already out of breath. “I’m naked and you’re not.” 

“I wouldn’t want to be accused of injustice.” Dran grinned as he stripped. Sarel’s mouth practically watered. Dear gods, he looked delicious. Before today, Sarel wouldn’t have thought anything could look better than Dran in his formal kingdom colors. Now that she’d seen him naked, Sarel didn’t think she’d ever be happy to have him wearing clothes in her presence again. 

His chest was broad and muscled, with a smattering of hair going all the way down to his navel. His blond hair and blue eyes matched perfectly with his pale skin tone. Sarel ran her fingers through his hair, never breaking his gaze. 

She could tell by the way he looked at her that he found her just as desirable as she found him. Sarel moved to kiss him again. They kissed with fierce desperation, finally giving in to the call of their bodies. 

Dran kept one hand behind her back and used the other to finger her nipples. They quickly hardened under his touch, and Sarel moaned at the contact. She reached a hand down between their bodies, longing to feel Dran’s cock. It was huge and leaking, and she wanted to know what it felt like. 

Sarel had never had sex before, but she’d read enough steamy romance books to have a fairly good understanding of it. Her pussy was aching and empty, just like she’d read in her books. She wanted to be filled. 

Sarel had never seen a cock before either, and it was bigger than she’d imagined. Dran gasped as she encircled it in her fingers. It was harder than she’d thought it would be, too, like hot flesh wrapped around a wooden stake. She couldn’t help but imagine what it would feel like deep inside her.