First off , THANK YOU. You were the first eyes on this story, and your feedback, reactions, and encouragement honestly helped push me to the finish line. Moon Bound Desires is now officially in its first full draft (!!) and I’m finally ready for the next phase: beta reading.

This is where things get a little more serious — in a good way. 😊

If you’re up for it, I’d love to have you on the beta reader team.

Here’s what’s different this time around:

• I’m not just looking for “what you liked” (though that’s still great to hear!).
• I really want to know what’s not working. And more importantly — why it’s not working for you.
• Got suggestions? Lay them on me. If something feels off, awkward, confusing, or just flat, tell me how you would improve it. I want your honest take, and I’m not afraid of criticism, I promise.

If you’re in, I’ll send over the beta version of the manuscript + a little guide with the kind of feedback I’m looking for, just to make things easier.

Let me know if you’re game!

Sign up here!

Big thanks (again),

Antonella Sinner