Hello again my lovely bookworm,

First of all—thank you SO much to those of you who’ve already shared feedback on Shifting Hearts in the Frost! I’ve been snuggled up with your comments like they’re my emotional support blanket (no shame). Your thoughts have been chef’s kiss and exactly what I needed to whip this baby into second-draft shape.

If you’re still reading or finishing up—no worries at all! This isn’t a race through the snow. I know life gets busy, and honestly, I’m just thrilled to have you on the Dawnborn Team.

I’ve received a bunch of amazing suggestions (yes, I’ve got a running Google Doc full of your glorious opinions), and I will be going in with my editing quill soon. Once the second draft is ready, I’ll be sending it your way again so you can let me know if it reads smoother, stronger, and a little more unputdownable. Or, if you spot anything else that needs some magical polish!

TL;DR:

• I’m loving the feedback so far—thank you!
• Still working through everyone’s suggestions.
• A shinier version is coming soon!
• You’ll get another chance to tear it apart (lovingly, of course).
• If you haven’t had the chance to finish yet but still want to chime in, I’d love your thoughts, even if they’re bullet points or just a chaotic brain dump. I’m here for it. Truly.

Talk soon, and keep your cloaks close—Dawngarde’s winter isn’t over just yet.

With love and shadowy plot twists,

Antonella Sinner

Paranormal Romance Author & Alpha of the Editing Pack