Dear Dawnborn Team,

I have an exciting new beta reading opportunity for you! My dark fantasy novella, Shifting Hearts in the Frost, is ready for critique, and I’d love to hear your thoughts. Since you’re already part of the team, you get first access!

About the Book

In this world of shadows and secrets, fiery determination entwines with sparks of desire.

Since awakening as an omega, the lowest rank among my kind, I’ve vowed to prove my worth in this world skeptical of my abilities simply because of my status.

I yearn for acceptance into the feline army, the valiant defenders against the malicious Gladsheim hunters who hunger for our kind’s demise. Fate barges through our doorstep in the heart of war, and the Gladsheim hunters deliver a devastating blow.

Born as the runt of the litter, I carry within me an unyielding will and an insatiable desire to surpass all expectations. The elation coursing through my veins is indescribable when news arrives—I have been granted entry into the feline army. At last, an opportunity to silence the doubters and thrust their muddied faces into the truth. However, fate unveils its twist as I discover my battle instructor—the enigmatic panther alpha, Zara Nightshade, who has no desire to be entangled with me. In her eyes, I am feeble, unworthy of the fight, destined for a life in the omega nests, confined to breeding for the sake of our lineage.

Now, I tread a treacherous path, burdened with the weight of proving my mettle amidst battle. It falls upon me to challenge Zara's dismissive beliefs, to shatter the constraints she has placed upon me. In this struggle for acceptance, I yearn not only to secure my place but to alter Zara's perception of my abilities. Little did I know that the flames of passion, like an inferno, bind our fates together. As Zara's touch reaches out, a glimmer of hope emerges—an ethereal chance for my icy heart to thaw, forever altering the course of our destinies.

Find out how Zara's touch becomes a gateway to unexplored ecstasy, coaxing Evangeline to unlock the submissive essence concealed within, urging her to surrender to her true nature.

How to Access the Manuscript

✔️ The book is under 40,000 words, making it a quick read.

✔️ Here's the Google Doc link for those who prefer it.

Google Doc Link!

If you have any access issues, email me at antonellasinnernovels@hotmail.com.

✔️If you prefer PDF or ePub, download your copy here:

PDF

ePub

Beta Reader Questionnaire

Below is the Beta Reader Questionnaire to help guide your feedback. Answer as thoroughly as possible, and if you need more space, feel free to attach a separate document.

Beta Reader Questionnaire!

Deadline & Expectations

Please aim to submit feedback within 2-4 weeks of receiving the manuscript. Extensions are available if needed—just let me know.

I’m looking for feedback on:

✔️ Plot flow, pacing, and character development

✔️ Areas that might need expansion or refinement

✔️ Scene suggestions or any enhancements

✔️ Honest, constructive critiques—I welcome them!

Final Notes

I’ll send a few check-ins along the way to make sure everything is running smoothly. If at any point you need to step back, no worries—just let me know. Life happens!

I’m beyond excited to hear your thoughts, and I can’t wait to share this journey with you.

Thank you for being part of the Dawnborn Team!

Best,

Antonella Sinner